Prompt 4.01

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Five times Jack listened to Daniel in the field without question



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Re: Five times Jack listened to Daniel in the field without question

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Yay!!! for these too! All good- these so funny it hurt me:

"the lines mean something else if it's a Tuesday--"

"what he really wants to know is how long Daniel can keep this up."

"Teal'c is making a career of the perimeter he's walking, and Jack knows Daniel must breathe through his skin."

Followed quickly by Ouch/Awww:

"But he can't find a way out now, because Daniel is more relaxed than anything Jack's seen since Abydos."

Then laugh/hurt, laugh/hurt, all entertaining and ring very true to them. Ouchie for changed Daniel in #3, and Jack changing what he wished for.

#5 made me hurt for all of them, esp. this: "because Daniel isn't asking for much of anything from anyone."

And then my *very favorite bit*, the last line. So sad, and so poignant, and so Jack/Daniel.

You rock.