Four ways Mark Carter and/or Dave Sheppard didn’t find out about the stargate program, and one way they did


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From: [identity profile] smilebackwards.livejournal.com

Four ways Dave Sheppard didn’t find out about the Stargate Program, and one way he did. [Part 1]


Four ways Dave Sheppard didn’t find out about the Stargate Program:


i.

Dave hates the bitterness between them. He hates that they never took the chance to heal old wounds, that Dad’s dead and now they’ll never have that chance.

No matter what he said, Dave knows that John isn’t here for money. He wishes he hadn’t made the accusation, because it’s just one more hurt on top of everything else and because of the look in John’s eyes, but the sting of John leaving the wake halfway through was too much. He doesn’t really expect John to come back, and certainly not to look so entirely beat up and destroyed.

“What the hell happened?” Dave asks when John winces, sitting down on the sofa. He remembers how his brother broke his arm when he was seven and never shed a tear, didn’t even tell anyone until three hours later when their mother had asked why he was cradling it.

“Work,” John says succinctly.

It kills Dave, not knowing what John does or even where he’s stationed, not knowing whether John won’t tell him because it’s classified or because he doesn’t think he’d care.

“Work!” Dave yells. “What do you do that requires you to leave your father’s funeral and come back looking like you’re halfway to the grave yourself?”

“I got you security clearance,” John says, looking up at him with bruised eyes. “Do you really want to know?”

Dave nods, and John tells him.


ii.

Ever since John announced that he was joining the Air Force, Dave has been terrified by the image of an officer in crisp dress blues, unsmiling and holding a letter, showing up at his door.

It’s almost twenty years past John’s declaration when it actually happens.

The only real differences from Dave’s early vision are that there are two officers instead of one and that they have a video tape in place of a letter. Not only are they unsmiling and sober, the younger man –a major Dave reads from his insignia– looks totally wrecked.

They introduce themselves as General Jack O’Neill and Major Evan Lorne and they say the words Dave has dreaded for twenty years, “Your brother was killed in action. I’m sorry for your loss.” They say other words about John, how he died heroically, saving other people, the way he would have wanted. They say that he was a good man, that he had many friends. Dave wonders if he was happy.

“Colonel Sheppard left this for you,” Major Lorne says, holding out the video tape. Dave takes it with numb hands and watches the men leave.

When he puts in the tape, he is greeted with John’s smiling face on the television screen, at once familiar and half forgotten. “Hi Dave,” John says laconically, and the smile drops from his face for a moment. “If you’re watching this, then I’m sorry for what that must mean about me, but there are some things I want you to know.” John’s smile comes back full-force and he looks so much like their mother and so much like himself that Dave has to cry. “I want you to know that I was happy here,” John continues. “I want to tell you about something amazing called the Stargate Program.”

From: [identity profile] smilebackwards.livejournal.com

Four ways Dave Sheppard didn't find out about the Stargate Program, and one way he did. [Part 2]


iii.

Everything is on fire. Washington and London and Tokyo and Moscow. Newscasters are talking about something called the Ori and Dave doesn’t understand how this could have happened and he doesn’t know what to do, who to call, if there even is anyone. Shirley left and Dad’s dead and he hasn’t heard from John since the funeral.

He hears a car pull up in the drive and runs outside, a sudden wild hope in his chest. A man in a military uniform gets out of the black car. It’s not John.

“Are you Dave Sheppard?” the man asks. Dave nods. “I’m Sergeant Bates. If you come with me, I’ll take you to your brother.” Dave figures he doesn’t really have anything to lose.

An hour later, he’s standing with a small group of people in front of a round circle of blue light called the Stargate and someone is saying how they are on a list of evacuees and if they’ll just step through the wormhole, they’ll be with their loved ones. There is a couple beside him with a young daughter, crying in her mother’s arms. “Shh, Madison, it’s okay,” he hears the mother say. “We’re going to see Uncle Mer.”

Dave steps through the Stargate and comes out somewhere entirely different, with stained glass windows, people and soldiers everywhere. “Dave!” someone shouts. The crowd parts, and suddenly John is in front of him, hugging him like they’re still children, or like it’s the end of the world. “Dave,” John says again, close to his ear, and Dave hugs back tight.


iv.

John calls randomly one night in early October and says, “Hey Dave, um, watch the news tomorrow, okay?” He hangs up before Dave can ask why.

Dave wakes up at 5 am and turns on the TV, but it’s just weather forecast and entertainment recap. At work, he keeps half an eye on the set in the lounge, waiting, and almost has a heart attack when he hears the word explosion. It turns out to just be a filler story about a gas leak.

Finally, the 6 o’clock news has an icon in all caps that reads: BREAKING STORY. The President gives a short, strange speech that only makes sense in context when generals in dress blues start talking about something called the Stargate Program.

They run pictures and video clips that are both horrifying and amazing and then Dave sees John up on a podium with the American flag behind him. “Hey, everyone,” John addresses the huge group of screaming reporters surrounding him, laid-back and cheerful, without the smug superiority of many of the earlier military leaders. Dave knows that John is talking to him. “I’m Lieutenant Colonel John Sheppard, and I’m the military CO of the best part of the Stargate Program. Atlantis.”
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From: [personal profile] saphirablue

Re: Four ways Dave Sheppard didn't find out about the Stargate Program, and one way he did. [Part 2]


OMG! I _adore_ #3 and would like to read a longer story of that, everthing from how it came to the attack of earth to Dave's first days and weeks on Atlantis - getting to know his brother (again) and learning what he does and did for the city...

God, I know this won't let me fall asleep tonight, going round and round in my head and I'll keep wishing for such a story for a long, long time...

Thank you for this!

Saphira

From: [identity profile] smilebackwards.livejournal.com

Re: Four ways Dave Sheppard didn't find out about the Stargate Program, and one way he did. [Part 2]


Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. And, um, I am actually sort of writing a fleshed out version of #3 ;) It may be a while and probably won't have anything substantial about the Ori attack on Earth (since I haven't yet watched the SG-1 seasons that deal with the Ori) but there will be lots of Dave and John learning to fit together again in Atlantis. ♥ Brothers

Here's a snippet for your reading pleasure:

“There are life-sucking space vampires here and you didn’t think you should tell me that?” Dave yells.

John winces, glancing around the control room and catching a few Marines smirking. “You were already looking kinda shocky when you got here,” he replies. “I didn’t want to worry you.”

Dave has no words for how fucked up this is so he just ends up making furious, ineffectual gestures in John’s direction.

“Stop that,” John says, catching Dave’s wrists. “You look like Rodney.” He clears his throat, his eyes going dark green and serious. “There are some…dangers out here. But we’ve got weapons and shields and brilliant people like you wouldn’t believe. So just, hold tight for me, okay?” He squeezes Dave’s wrists gently and lets go.

“Okay,” Dave says, turning away, suddenly ashamed by all the ways that he is weak here, where John is strong.
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From: [personal profile] saphirablue

Re: Four ways Dave Sheppard didn't find out about the Stargate Program, and one way he did. [Part 2]


You're welcome and um, HURRA! A story, a story, Hurra! :)

Oh, it don't have to deal with the destroying of the earth (be it ori or something else). I'm happy as long as there is Dave and John getting to know each other and Dave realising what John has done the last years, mix it with a bit of team-ness, angst, action and maybe some John whump and I won't be able to do anything else than adore this fic... :) (and the snippet is very, very promising! =) )

One last thing: Would you please so kind and tell me where you plan to post the story so that I can check there from time to time if you already posted it? *puppy dog eyes*

Thank you!

Saphira

From: [identity profile] smilebackwards.livejournal.com

Re: Four ways Dave Sheppard didn't find out about the Stargate Program, and one way he did. [Part 2]


There will be much John and Dave getting to know each other (yay brothers!) and some teamness (yay team!) and angst (yay apocalypse! ...just me) and I'm all about the John whump. I'm trying to actually work in some action and plot ;)

When it finally gets written I will probably put it up on [livejournal.com profile] sga_noticeboard and my journal. I'll drop you a link in this thread too if you like. It's nice to know that someone will read the thing! Lol.
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From: [personal profile] saphirablue

Re: Four ways Dave Sheppard didn't find out about the Stargate Program, and one way he did. [Part 2]


Oh, yes! Brothers! Team! Apocalypse! (yay!) John Whump!(double yay!!) *big happy sigh*

Thank you, a link here - that would be great! :)

Saphira

From: [identity profile] smilebackwards.livejournal.com

Four ways Dave Sheppard didn't find out about the Stargate Program, and one way he did. [Part 3]


And one way he did:


i.

There is a loud pounding on Dave’s front door at 3 o’clock in the morning and when he pulls open the door to yell at whatever idiot doesn’t understand the meaning of 3 o’clock in the morning there is a short man with thinning hair and a gun strapped to his leg. “You’re Dave Sheppard, right?” he says, pulling Dave out of the doorway without waiting for an answer.

There is a helicopter on the front lawn.

Dave stares and the man shouts, “Hurry up!” and pushes him inside. “Okay, okay,” the man says, while Dave continues to stare, shell-shocked. “Okay,” the man says again, finally calming slightly. “I’m Dr. Rodney McKay and I’m sorry about this, but your idiot brother was injured pulling another one of his heroic, self-sacrificing stunts and the doctor said to get the next of kin.”

Dave feels his heart stutter and suddenly doesn’t care about any of the weird shit that’s just happened as long as it’s getting him to John. “How?” he croaks.

Rodney talks and talks and talks all the way through four military checkpoints and down into a huge underground complex. Dave doesn’t really get the parts about wormhole physics and hive ships, but he does get the other galaxies and aliens.

Oh my God, Dave thinks, my brother fights space aliens and then he just thinks Oh my God, because there is John in a hospital bed, pale and bandaged, with nurses and doctors flitting around in every direction screaming things like, “Charge to 150” and “We’re losing him!”

John wakes up two days later and Rodney tells him, “Beckett was on M4X-333 so we had to evacuate you to the SGC for treatment. Also, your brother is here” and leaves.

“Dave?” John says weakly, and he sounds like his little brother again, who wouldn’t ask for help, but sometimes needed it.

“I’m here,” Dave answers, taking his hand. “So, this is what you do, huh?”

John smiles. “Yeah, this is what I do.”

From: [identity profile] smilebackwards.livejournal.com

Re: Four ways Dave Sheppard didn't find out about the Stargate Program, and one way he did. [Part 3]


Thanks! I was debating which of the five would be the way Dave did find out, and I was like, hmmm...definitely the one where John gets hurt and someone else has to tell Dave ;)

#3: I think Dave on Atlantis would be great fun! Although probably not so much under those circumstances...
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From: [personal profile] sid

Re: Four ways Dave Sheppard didn't find out about the Stargate Program, and one way he did. [Part 3]


Awesome. I think #3 is my favorite - which makes me worry about myself a little bit! Apocalypse, anyone?

I totally love the image of John, relaxed and cheerful, talking about his beloved Atlantis - telling the world, and especially his big brother. :-)

From: [identity profile] smilebackwards.livejournal.com

Re: Four ways Dave Sheppard didn't find out about the Stargate Program, and one way he did. [Part 3]


Thanks!

I think #3 is my favorite - which makes me worry about myself a little bit! Apocalypse, anyone?

Lol. I'm totally with you. I love Apocalypse fic :)

From: [identity profile] smilebackwards.livejournal.com

Re: Some John/Cam; spoilers for SGA up to 519


Ow. ow. ow. ow. I'm glad that how Dave actually found out was the happy one! They were all lovely though. :)
lilyleia78: John Sheppard (SGA: John)

From: [personal profile] lilyleia78

Re: Some John/Cam; spoilers for SGA up to 519


That is really so John, to let Dave find out with the rest of the world. He can call later and say, 'Surprise?' Dork. :)
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From: [personal profile] sid

Re: Some John/Cam; spoilers for SGA up to 519


I like #2, with Dave's insight into what it would cost John if he broke his trust. That was really nicely done.

And #4 surprised me completely by turning out to be AU! Very sneaky. ;-)
lilyleia78: Close up of a lily in black and white (SGA: Atlantis gate)

From: [personal profile] lilyleia78

Spoilers for Atlantis episode, Enemy at the Gate


Four ways they didn't:

1. The same way everyone else did, when a giant alien city's shield failed in the middle of San Francisco Bay.

2. With a flash of light and an unexpected trip on a spaceship, complete with a little grey man, to deliver some sort of genetic component only a sibling could provide to save John and Sam from the latest alien illness to sneak past Atlantis's sensors.

3. On Oprah, during "I've got a secret" week.

4. A knock on the door, a solemn General O'Neill on the other side, three tons of papers promising swift retribution if they even thought of breathing a word of this to anyone, and and unbelievable tale of how their siblings had died to save the universe.

And the way they did:

5. Mark - A knock on the door, a solemn Sam on the other side, three tons of papers promising swift retribution if he even thought of breathing a word of this to anyone, and and unbelievable tale of how their father had cheated death, saved the universe on borrowed time, and died as he lived - a hero.

Dave - A knock on the door, a solemn John on the other side, three tons of papers promising swift retribution if he even thought of breathing a word of this to anyone, and and unbelievable tale of alien ancestors, flying cities, and a committee called the IOA who had changed the rules and allowed Dave to be witness to Atlantis's first wedding, his brother's, if he didn't mind watching him tie himself forever to one slightly grumpy astrophysicist.
lilyleia78: John Sheppard (SGA: John)

From: [personal profile] lilyleia78

Re: Spoilers for Atlantis episode, Enemy at the Gate


Come to think of it, 2 would make a great story. Feel free to tackle it if you feel inspired.

Thanks.
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