Five times Vala got what she wants: and regretted it



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sid: (Vala waitress)

From: [personal profile] sid


Psst! I have a couple of ideas for this prompt. If anybody else has a random thought or two, maybe we could co-author a complete set of five.

From: [identity profile] whisper99.livejournal.com


1.) After many months of nagging and complaining, she'd finally been allowed to get a driver's license. She regretted it because now she didn't have to ask Daniel to drive her around town anymore.

2.) She'd heard many stories about the great Jack O'Neill and wanted to meet the man herself. The day finally came when he invited SG1 to DC for a weekened bar-b-q and she'd driven Daniel mad with questions on what she should wear and how she should behave. At the party, she'd immediatly realized how Daniel came alive around Jack and how easily he could bring a smile to his face. Vala spent the rest of the day sitting quietly with Sam, wishing she'd never come.

3.) The golden figurine inside a temple on PX3-792. She spotted it in an alcove and reached for it without thinking to ask first; it was a question of 'She saw it. She wanted it. She took it'. There was no way for her to know that it was booby trapped. No way for her to know that Daniel would pay for her greed when the walls started collapsing around them.

4.) Vala always wanted to have a baby, even though she thought she might make as bad a mother as her own step mother. But still, she felt the life growing inside her and couldn't bring herself to try and end the pregnancy. She'd found a quiet life here and she was relatively safe, all things considered. She had a husband who loved her and maybe she could go back to how things were, before her life got turned inside out by Qetesh. She could start over. Nine months later Vala delivered a healthy and beautiful girl named Adria. She's regretted it ever since.

5.) After months of trying, Vala finally got Daniel into her bed. Deep into their lovemaking, she was suprised to find tears in his eyes as he climaxed inside her. He kissed her softly and whispered something that turned her cold. Didn't he understand? This was just sex. Nobody was supposed to love her; least of all him. She wasn't worth it.
paian: blank white (kleenex)

From: [personal profile] paian


Yow, these are lovely, although increasingly heartachey to the point of an out-loud 'ouch.' So glad you wrote to this prompt! But still all heartachey. ::hugs Vala, hugs you::

From: [identity profile] whisper99.livejournal.com


Thank you :) I figured that Vala probably isn't very used to getting what she wants and that when she finally did get it, there would be some bitterness to go along with it :)

That, plus I'm a angst-ho. It helps ;)
sid: (Vala/Daniel)

From: [personal profile] sid


Oh, #5 - poor Vala! She needs to spend some time with Dr. Phil, or something. Boost her self-image. Daniel obviously can see her worth.

I was glad to see Jack making an appearance, and interested to see that Vala didn't sulk and pout, but just sat quietly. More of that 'unworthy' feeling, I suppose.

#4 was one of the few ideas I could come up with, but you wrote it much better than I could have. :-)

From: [identity profile] whisper99.livejournal.com


#5 lol! Dr. Phil indeed. Did I ever tell you I have this vision of Daniel sitting down to discuss Vala way back in TPTB (remember the scene where he's ticking off her issues on his fingers and she's in his bed half nekkid?) I have in my head Teal'c sitting Daniel down and trying to help him figure her out. So yeah, I'm betting Dr. Phil fit into there somehow :)


And how could I not put Jack in there? >:) I think Vala would have realized how much there was lacking in her relationship with Daniel when she finally saw him with Jack. I also think it says alot that she's sitting with Sam - if you catch my drift, where they are, in this case, two women who are with two men they can't ever have, but really want.

#4 was easy :) Poor thing. It's got to be hard being the mother of a mass murderer, harder still that she prevented her death at least twice now.
sid: (Jack 200)

From: [personal profile] sid


Oh, gosh. I never even looked for anything symbolic in Vala sitting with Sam. D'oh!

From: [identity profile] whisper99.livejournal.com


Thanks :) *pats Vala* I'm sure Daniel will make her feel better soon :)
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