My favorites are the first two--you really, really have the characters down so well! Sam would absolutely react like that--the progression is perfect, too. She'd initially just be disgusted and then once she realized that Vala wasn't going to go away, she'd carefully explain her viewpoint and maybe even let her guard down a little. You also write about Teal'c so fabulously well--but what I love the most is the consistently Valaesque the thoughts and reactions are in this. Even when the thought's a throwaway like 'liberated the Prometheus from its uncaring masters,' it's in Vala's mind, not the generic SG-1 mind, not YOUR mind, but hers. Mark of someone who really gets it, imo.
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Re: Four things Vala would miss about Earth if she left, & one that she wouldn't (part 2)
Date: 2009-07-08 06:43 pm (UTC)Loved it!