This was just absolutely wonderful. I love that you did it with a tertiary character, and really gave the pieces a chance to grow by using two posts. You also did a neat thing with the Summer of Love and Pill parts, aging the piece into a time frame that fit for Wendy. I liked that you really chose turning points in Wendy's life. Literal moments of change. Well done!
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Date: 2012-03-13 04:46 am (UTC)