Prompt 42.05

[paian]

Four hotspots on Jack's body that really get him going, and one that doesn't; and why in hell did anyone think that would do it for him?


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[dodau.livejournal.com]

His toes. Too many years of cramming them into boots of differing quality had left them crooked and ugly. Why anyone would think sucking them would turn him on was beyond him as was the fact that any one would want to suck them.

His belly. He has very sensitive skin on his lower belly just above his groin and someone kissing their way down, en route to a blow job always makes him squirm with pleasure.

Theres a spot right on the end of his cock that if you press your tongue into just right. Well he sees stars and hears fireworks and his knees give way, so he has to make sure he’s sat down first.

His ears. He loves it when women talk dirty to him during sex. A soft voice whispering filthy things in his ear and he’s close to coming within seconds.

His nose, but only when it smells one thing. Samatha Carter. She wears a light perfume that doesn’t entirely mask her own natural scent underneath. He loves it when they’re stood close to each other and he can smell her. It makes him hard and he has to concentrate hard on other things to make it go away during missions and meetings. Then he goes back to his quarters or back to his house and he wanks thinking of how she smells.

(ADULT) Four hotspots on Jack's body that really get him going, and one that doesn't; etc.

[sid]

1. His perineum. He accidentally discovered it as a very young teen. He didn’t even know there was a word for it back then, and it was a pleasant shock the first time someone else deliberately touched him there and he realized the rest of the world knew about it, too, and that he was normal after all.

2. His toes. Specifically, a tongue lapping at the underside of his toes. Also accidentally discovered, when a pet dog licked his foot and he got an instant hard-on. The first time a girl asked him to do that to her, he was incredibly relieved to realize that he was normal after all. And when she wouldn’t return the favor, he went out and found somebody who would.

3. His nipples. When a boy begins jerking off for the first time, he starts with the obvious. Everything else comes later (embellishments and flourishes). Jack saw how his nipples puckered and rose when he played with himself, but they did the same thing when he swam, so that didn’t seem very interesting. When he got around to touching one, it felt okay, but nothing special.

Then one day, right after coming, he noticed that they looked different than they did before he came. He touched one and it was hard as a rock, and he knew there was some sexual connection he hadn’t figured out yet. That night at bedtime, instead of going straight for his dick, he started with his nipples, teasing and stroking them until they rose. He rubbed one between his fingers and thumb, and his hardening dick jerked.

He pinched. Pinched both. Harder. Rolled over and stifled his moans in the pillow as he bucked his hips against the mattress and squeezed as hard as he could.

Next day, his nipples ached against the soft cotton of his undershirt and he couldn’t wait to get home from school.

4. His armpits. Somebody nuzzling and licking at his armpits just turns him on, and his hands clench and his feet flex and he can’t keep his legs or his body still, and if a heavy weight is pressing him down so that he can’t move… he goes wild with need.

He’s never found a woman who was into that kind of thing. Some guys like it though. One in particular.

5. His ear? Huh? Slimy saliva and a weird tickle and Jack’s squirming. And not in the good way, either. And then his ear’s all damp and cold as he shoves until the intruder pulls back. Just, ew.

Yeah, yeah. Linguists do it with tongue. Just, not there. Puh-leaze.

There? Oh, yeah. That’s much… better. Mmmm. Yeah. Speak to me.

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[green-grrl.livejournal.com]

Mmmmmm!!! I love all the glimpses of teen!Jack figuring his body out.

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[sid]

Yay! I figured that was a good place to start. :-)

[sid]

Mmm, love the third one. Yeah, sit down, lie down. *g*

[paian]

Good list, thanks! I like how it flips the order from the prompt -- starts with the one that doesn't work for him (the one you chose makes so much sense to me, too) and then gets to the nice ones that do work. :-)

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[paian]

Great list, really believable and well done, and very hot even though (or maybe because) they don't seem to be intended as dramatized erotica. I also really like how ears and toes are kind of flipped around from what dodau did with them, but the ears one is kind of similar as well -- that's one of the things I love best about this comm, and it's so fun to see it here. And of course I love the J/Dness, especially the way it hints at it in #4 and then delivers in #5. And what green_grrl said -- love how you started with his early explorations/discoveries.

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[tresa-cho.livejournal.com]

Very nicely done.

[tresa-cho.livejournal.com]

Lovely~!

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[sid]

Yes, the ears/toes flip-flop was made of coolness!

Hmm, only the nipples one ventures into erotica territory, I'd say, but even that one is all very factual/clinical. I think any hotness is purely a Jack!byproduct. *g*

It's so different for boys, isn't it (for reasons Captain Carter made clear in the pilot episode.) I had to read a book to find out why it felt good to shimmy up the leg of the swingset. ;-)

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[sid]

Thanks! Glad it, er, hit the spot! :-D

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[chattycatsmeow.livejournal.com]

Ooooh, very nice. I like the progression from early exploration to more current pursuits. #3 is an especially good example of a young man learning how his body works and what feels good for him.

I'm with Jack on the ear thing. ;-)

[msbeata.livejournal.com]

The second and third ones lead to a very happy place.

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[sid]

Thanks - glad you liked it. :-)

Yeah, the ear thing kinda bugs me, too. Maybe not as much as Jack, lol.

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[starglyph.livejournal.com]

Fabulous, and I love the progression! Especially #3...

This was my prompt (which I had no time to write for, so I'm extra glad you did), and now I wish I'd done a mirror prompt for Daniel.

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[sid]

Mirror prompt. That occurred to me, too, actually. So have you already dropped it into the suggestion box, or what? *g*

I'm so glad you enjoyed my response (especially #3) - it was such a great prompt!

Yay armpit!icon!!

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[starglyph.livejournal.com]

Mirror prompt done! (The next set's already up, so it'll maybe be in the one after.) I'll be expecting more armpit kink. :)

And, do'h! I meant #4, if that wasn't readily apparent by now. :D

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[sid]

Oh, ha, I really thought you meant #3 but just had a groovy #4ish icon!

I'll have to start thinking about potential Daniel hotspots. *drools* It'll be a chore. *daydreams* Hee, I think I already have the wtf? one picked out. :-D

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[msbeata.livejournal.com]

I love Jack wondering if he's normal and being relieved to find out that he is.

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[sid]

We all do that, don't we? Like wondering if there's something wrong with getting off on two men together? :-)

PSSSSTTTT!!! I wrote you something! *veg*

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[msbeata.livejournal.com]

Yes! I was so happy when I found other women who get off on gay sex.

I read and loved it!!!!!

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[sid]

:-)

[dodau.livejournal.com]

Just wanted to add a thank you to RDA for the one about the toes. His toes are truely gross

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[jd-junkie.livejournal.com]

These are great. Especially #4 because, obviously, Daniel is totally into that.
Really glad you wrote to this prompt. I only had one idea, and that was to do with Jack loving it when someone (!) licks his scarred eyebrow.
I worry about myself sometimes ....

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[sid]

There's going to be a mirror prompt for Daniel coming up, and you will see that I worry about myself sometimes, too....

Glad you liked these!

[muffinlips146.livejournal.com]

His toes, or just toes in general?

If it's his in particular, I now feel compelled to see them. Know where I can?

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[melayneseahawk.livejournal.com]

Nice!

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[sid]

Heh, I was just thinking - it would be hard to hold it down to only 4 or 5 things if the prompt read: spots on Jack's body that really get Daniel going! :-D

Glad you liked!