Great list, really believable and well done, and very hot even though (or maybe because) they don't seem to be intended as dramatized erotica. I also really like how ears and toes are kind of flipped around from what dodau did with them, but the ears one is kind of similar as well -- that's one of the things I love best about this comm, and it's so fun to see it here. And of course I love the J/Dness, especially the way it hints at it in #4 and then delivers in #5. And what green_grrl said -- love how you started with his early explorations/discoveries.
Re: (ADULT) Four hotspots on Jack's body that really get him going, and one that doesn't; etc.
Date: 2008-04-15 04:52 pm (UTC)